At last, big developments have been made on Willow's character in the past week or so. I started filling out a character profile sheet for him, similar to the one I did for Colonel Carrington a while back and identical to the one I started for Captain Fetterman, and then found another really good and detailed one online so printed that one out and started answering that one too, this time handwritten instead of typed up. Therefore, most of his family background is done and his failures, successes, regrets, fears, friends (most significantly a Lewis Burton during the early days of the Civil War who taught him a lot about the army) and a lot of his physical appearance too. I have also come to adore him quite a lot as I imagine he's going to be a very fun character to describe and write, with his little incidents and stories and sassy personality, incidentally the first real lead character I have had who isn't all polite and sweet. He has now become my favourite fictional character of mine and has quite a few little scenes reserved for him.
These little scenes get written down, whatever idea they are, and when the plan is written, they will be slotted in. Usually, they are little silly ones but more recently, they have been serving as a development tool for the Fetterman-Willow relationship, where Willow has gone off Fetterman after the War because of how much he does recruiting instead of fighting, which is not really his fault but Willow still dislikes it. So therefore, there are little scenes to make Willow like Fetterman again, such as Fetterman saving Willow from choking and also letting him out of the locked basement though that's got a different, long background to do it as well as being a little scene!
As well as this, I started a little excerpt of the story for my dad when he went on holiday to send him in parts. It is turning out to be longer than I first imagined but it is very nice to start writing some of this story, as well as planning it (although I do love doing that too!). I don't think the excerpt will be directly used in the story but I'll still try and use some lines. It was especially fun to write Carrington's character as the excerpt was set in the December 6th fight where Carrington is now quite jealous of Fetterman and gets very frustrated that he, himself, isn't doing very well in front of his men, especially when he falls into the icy cold water of the Big Piney Creek in front of everybody. Another good thing about writing this 'little' excerpt was that I had to plan it too and although that dug up quite a bit of confusion with where certain people *Grummond and Carrington* were a bit of the time, I'm glad I finished the plan because I'll probably use that for the plan of the chapter in the story about December 6th.
Too, I started carrying on with the timelines, which need to be finished, really, for the story's plan to begin to take form. July was finally finished, though some handwritten notes may be written around the edges of the printed copy from other books (especially the John H Monnett book), like what happened to the other printed timelines (namely the 1865 and the 1866 January-June timelines), and the August 1866 timeline has also been started.
In other news, there was a rather stupid article in our Isle of Wight County Press the other day that had the writer insulting Native Americans at the Battle of the Little Bighorn by calling them 'those horrid Sioux Indians' and just generally being offensive towards them, while also comparing them to our government forcing our Island into doing something we didn't want to do and trying to join us with the mainland. In short, the article was pointless, inconsistent, confusing and offensive so needless to say, I wrote a letter in that I'm soon going to post to the newspaper! :) Getting to people the old fashioned way, Captain Benteen-style!
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